i ride T express WHEN I WAS 11!!!
i was very scare when the rollar coaster
fall down!!!! IT WAS TERRIBLE!!!!
when the rollar coaster. i think that here
is heaven~~ and i decided that i will never
ride rollar coaster BUT this year i went to
everland with my friends said ride T express!!!!!!!!!
and i said i haveache so ican;t and i don't ride rollar coaster.
when my friends come out of rollar coaster they looks
Mr. Kim,
답글삭제Your narrative essay was short. I wanted to read more about your T Express experience and it’s too bad that you did not write enough. I think your topic was cool. I wish that you had narrated the experience with a lot of action and description. I would really like you to try your best in composing an organised, grammatically correct and cohesive essay. You have so much enthusiasm in class, so I know you could do this if you tried.